T1+Persuade

//__**Monday 21 March 2011**__// L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.E ffective position statement:S.C. we can
 * make our position and purpose clear
 * use a rhetorical question
 * include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can
 * restate my position throughout my writing
 * make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics

__Monday 21 March 2011__

Rimu Team

30 18th avenue Tauranga

Dear Mr Diver

Room 41 have been talking about how if you could continue giving us an extended morning tea. When you were a kid did you wont an extended morning tea? So teachers can mark work, go to meetings and so they are up to date in there work. The students will get back into class more quickly. So we can get more physical education, go out have fun and wast our energy so in Assembly we are all sitting quit.

Since we will be getting off the field quickly. We will be able to do more work during class and listen to the teacher more.☺

The second reason is to let us keep getting the extended morning is so you and all the teachers can get a brake from us kids. And we all know how much teachers won’t a longer morning tea and we will get one to. So we all win.

And the last reason is So we get more physical education and fresh air for our brains to work better and so we get more time to practice our sport as well

In Assembly we are usely really noisy but if we have a longer morning tea we will waste all of our energy. So then we will not be all noisy and we will sit still. Now won’t that make you really happy?

So all of the above statements are why you should keep giving us extended morning teas. I hope you consider it. your sincerly Morgan Craven



Thusday 7 April 2011 Nuclear Power

Some people say nuclear power is a good thing and some people don’t. I think that it is a bad thing. One of the reasons why is that we might have a nuclear melt down, give us cancer and will attracted terrorists. So what do you say is it a good source of power or a good source of power for New Zealand?

Nuclear melt down might happen if we get a nuclear reactor. Like in 1986 Chernobyl, Thousands of people how lived in areas where the reactor’s radioactive waste was carried by wind and died of cancer and related diseases. There still continues to be abnormally high birth rate of birth defects in children in Chernobyl.

 If you live within 5 km of a Nuclear power plant when you are a child you have a higher risk of getting cancer when you get older. And if you get cancer you will may need to pay the hospital fees .do you won‘t cancer?

Since nuclear power is also a weapon it can attract terrorist because if you can blow it up you will have an instant bomb and all the radiation will or may kill us, we could just use wind power and solar power to keep us ranning.

So now I have told you that we do not need nuclear power in New Zealand. So do you think that we need nuclear power?